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Abundance of a Rich Man
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Abundance of a Rich Man |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Oh the embrace of life’s right hand With a necklace of love and truthfulness Writing them on our hearts where no love Should take refuge or hide from the nest of others For without wood, the fire disintegrates Partnerships are for giving… Were we lay like a newborn in the belly of the stars With eyes that see full generations forever There is no sleep, nor day or night…but labor And I will depart as naked as I arrived….. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee - this is a masterpiece . . . reminds me of Morrison xxoo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, now, that's a compliment...loved that guys mind...but hated the song "Light my Fire"....the radio industry played it over and over and over again...ugh! Thank you Sea for reading and commenting. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this, I like short and to the point without being too direct...if that makes sense I can relate to this because I work with people who have half-million dollar houses and $40,000 cars...sigh |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
You have such a way with words! Incredible write!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"There is no sleep, nor day or night…but labor And I will depart as naked as I arrived….." AMEN...I always say, you can't take none of this with you when you go! Great write Lee! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Excellent!   EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
That's right, Lee. We will leave with nothing, as we came into the world with nothing. A good thought-provoking write.  Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You've got it Lee... *Hopefully I'll leave with the same curly hair I came into the world with.* This is extremely well done and hits it right on! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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