Open Poetry #27 |
The Beauty Inside |
Christina24rb Junior Member
since 2003-07-25
Posts 13Georgia |
In he glow from the crystal clear pool I see a girl, so wild and free. And though youth and beauty are nice indeed, they only go as far as being skin deep. The brown hair that shines, that soft nose of mine. The eyes so blue, the rosy cheeks of maroon. Though I am blessed by beauty so sweet I know that there is more that makes me complete. It's what is inside that truly counts. A reflection of who I am: and in the end it all amounts to the purity on the inside and not on the out. Is it a soul of pride or a soul of joy? Or how about a soul that cries... or a soul that worries? A heart so true that cries when I'm blue A heart made for loving and a heart made for nurturing. What is inside you? Take a moment to see, the beauty to hold onto as you age gracefully. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Indeed - what is inside is who you are . . . What is inside you? Take a moment to see, the beauty to hold onto as you age gracefully. xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your last stanza sums up your poem beautifully! EA |
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