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The Stream Gently Flows
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The Stream Gently Flows |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Stream Gently Flows Midnight... upon the bridge, where the stream gently flows. I smile and think of my sweethearts luscious lips, as I wait beneath the moons silky glow. From the bridge, off into the distance I see, my sweetheart, approaching me. The wind brings her sweet voice to me. Midnight... upon the bridge, where the stream gently flows, we will share our destiny. JamesLee July30 2003 |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your poetry is becoming more alive! ~enjoyed Thanks~ARH |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your images are beautiful in this verse...soft and flowing. Patricia |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Just beautiful, James!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I am not exactly sure what it is about bridges but I do find that particular setting as a very romantic one. At least the one that came to my mind while reading this piece ... good memories there ... yes indeed. Thanks for the memory smile this morning. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and together as she goes....lovely flow my friend |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, lovely.....yup.  Chris |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Romantic Heart, Patricia, Saunni, Janette, Lee J, and Nightshade for the nice responses...I appreciate it...James |
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