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Open Poetry #27

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-31 01:57 AM

I know
you know,
we ate
the seeds we sow.

Trust me,
I'll hold
them untill
they grow.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-07-31 02:01 AM

And grow they will, such as your fans will each time you pick up your pen!!! This is food for thought, and appreciated by this poet!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-31 02:04 AM

Yes, Kaoru, I agree with Sunnyone...
you are a very good poet, my friend.
I enjoy reading your work.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-31 02:08 AM

excellent! I enjoy reading you...quite a bit I can relate to well

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-31 10:21 AM

a glint of hope?

I loved this!

hold them in your palm, ohh so tightly Kaoru . . . then let them fallto the dirt and breathe
xxoo

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-07-31 10:24 AM

we have no choice but to allow them to grow...

very nice
*s
M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-07-31 10:33 AM

It is not always easy eating what we sow..

Excellent...

Susan C.

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