»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #27
»
On a Stormy Day
| Open Poetry #27 |
|
On a Stormy Day |
|
|
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
On a Stormy Day Today I tried to catch a lightning bolt It was a stormy day But as they flashed around me I was always looking the wrong way And further more I am too slow So all I got was grey  As I sat and waited I pondered on the, what has been And also on the, what can be As my mind was wandering I looked up at the sky I saw a fading rainbow Again I was a bit too slow But I caught the after glow  Hearing the distant thunder As the storm subsided I looked towards the setting sun Its picturesque beauty reminded me of you I captured it And saved its spectacular view  "No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown [This message has been edited by Amature2 (07-30-2003 10:34 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Amature2 - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aren't we more than fortunate that Ron has given us so much room to match our words to pictures, and for pictures to lend us words? Bravo! |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great presentation! |
||
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
As always, you write beautifully, and the pictoral of this is so lovely.. My favorite part of nature. *hugs* So sweet the smell of rain! loved it  |
||
|
Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Amature2... I'm glad I'm not the only one who isn't quick enough to catch the lightning! Isn't it amazing that you can get such a beautiful sunset after a storm? Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Totally enjoyed this presentation, especially the rainbow!!! Excellent thoughts! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
||
|
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Excellent write! This is beyond words to say how wonderful it is. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
||
|
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I loved this. I can spend hours imagining pictures in the clouds. Maggie |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
