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cusick
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0 posted 2003-07-30 01:49 PM


GOODBYE

Goodbye to my teeth,
goodbye to my hair,
my manner is
so underwhelming.

My bladder is weak .
I feel like a freak
and an aid to my ear
I am wearing.

My eyesight is dim,
I'm told I'm too thin.
Old age comes
without caring.


I'd put up with this,
even blow them a kiss
but even my bones
need repairing.


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Poe_Pot_Pie
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1 posted 2003-07-30 02:41 PM


That was worth my reading. You really should have made it part of my Laugh Challenge. You have real talent for entertaining!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-07-30 02:48 PM



Maggie, thanks for the grin!

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-07-30 02:59 PM


hahahaha this is so funny, but *O*U*C*H*!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Janette
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4 posted 2003-07-30 08:01 PM


Cute write.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-31 03:01 AM


cute....heheheh
cusick
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6 posted 2003-07-31 08:29 AM


Thank you all for your kind words. Maggie
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