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Open Poetry #27

For a laugh

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-07-30 01:49 PM

GOODBYE

Goodbye to my teeth,
goodbye to my hair,
my manner is
so underwhelming.

My bladder is weak .
I feel like a freak
and an aid to my ear
I am wearing.

My eyesight is dim,
I'm told I'm too thin.
Old age comes
without caring.

I'd put up with this,
even blow them a kiss
but even my bones
need repairing.

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-07-30 02:41 PM

That was worth my reading. You really should have made it part of my Laugh Challenge. You have real talent for entertaining!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-07-30 02:48 PM

Maggie, thanks for the grin!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-07-30 02:59 PM

hahahaha this is so funny, but *O*U*C*H*!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-30 08:01 PM

Cute write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-31 03:01 AM

cute....heheheh

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-07-31 08:29 AM

Thank you all for your kind words. Maggie

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