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Forbidden Beauty
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Forbidden Beauty |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Forbidden beauty, In my view. Love from afar - You don't know how I want you. The curves of your body The smile on your face... I am enchanted by you But your skin I'll never taste. For our worlds are split Our beliefs, not the same. If you ever knew, Would our friendship remain? We're separated by your religion [And my lack thereof...] Please, open your mind Open your heart - Your beautiful, poetic heart... And take a risk. Take me! I surrender myself to my daydreams Until you return my love. I admire your strength But I envy the Lord - You've given yourself to Him. To Her. [Please, let it be Her...] Are you interested? Do you think of me that way? Do I even have a chance? Don't tell me. Fantasy is always better Than reality. The rain pours heavily... As heavily as my labored breath upon your cheek As the darkness cloaks our bodies Hides us from the cruel and prejudiced world. Forever, in my mind I keep our Love - The affair you'll never know you had. It's yours to share If only you'll see That we don't have to be Just friends. But until you see me here... Until I feel your lips on mine, You'll remain in my heart Two seats away... My forbidden beauty. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
oh this is poem has such desire and longing, full of passion! enjoyed it! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words of love and longing, yet such a sad situation. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
simply breath taking! Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
i loved it. thanks for the write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Laqe - may you both find the will in each other's hearts... BC |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Courage! Reach out and ask. Better to be washed in the despair of rejection than to die wondering "What if...." A very well written poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good write, I enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Full of passions Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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