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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-07-30 10:53 AM

Paths of green
scattered with thoughts
of yesteryear
and
some of things to come
the reeds bend
in summer breezes
when my thoughts
of love
and things that are true
and things
the mind transcends
I know
I have to prepare
as petals fall
from my fingers
for ashes of things gone
to not affect me so
And when the reed bends
on the next years
summer breezes
as the old
flows in to the new
prepared
ready
for another
green path
in my life
to show!

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-07-30 11:01 AM

Oh, I liked the thoughts here very much...it held hope of new paths, waiting in fresh breezes. Enjoyed the images that went from the words into mind's eye!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-30 11:04 AM

Very lovely imagery here...nicely worded and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-07-30 11:54 AM

This is lovely! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-07-30 12:15 PM

SharaRose~
Oh ... I like the 'path' your poetry is taking~

'I know
I have to prepare
as petals fall
from my fingers
for ashes of things gone'

Such a soft thought ... *applause*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-07-30 02:51 PM

Thanks girls. I appreciate the encouraging words! You have no idea how much it means.

Love to you all,

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-31 09:55 AM

Shara - I did need this positive message today indeed
thank you
xxoo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-07-31 02:41 PM

Very insightful write...pretty choice of words brought just the right flow on the page. Really nice. TD

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2003-07-31 02:45 PM

Shara, I've just had the chance to read some of your work and I find each one to be extremely and sincerely BEAUTIFUL! You really shine!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-07-31 04:16 PM

Thanks, Littlewing. The positive is a step I take one day at a time. Thanks for noticing that about these words. I've got to work toward that every day. Kinda makes you crazy somethimes.

Thanks, thisdiamond. hehehe Someone says it's the muse thing...

Thanks Saunni, Thank you so much. Your words are encouraging..

Bless ya all. All of you are sweet.

Huggles,

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2003-07-31 09:18 PM

Nice work.
Sandra

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

11 posted 2003-07-31 10:56 PM

Thank you, I am glad you liked.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lady Moiraine
Junior Member

since 2003-07-29

Posts 24
Florida

12 posted 2003-08-01 01:33 AM

It made me feel very nostalgic. I really enjoyed wandering through my past while reading your poem. Thank-you for posting it!

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

13 posted 2003-08-01 01:37 AM

the reeds bend
in summer breezes
when my thoughts
of love
and things that are true
and things
the mind transcends
_________
Great imagery here...

Mike

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my email is bigmike@peakpool.com
, feel free to write

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

14 posted 2003-08-01 01:58 AM

SharaRose, I always enjoy your writes and sometimes it's easier to see from another perspective.Nicely done my friend

angelblueyes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-08-01 03:15 AM

needed this uplifting today...thank you

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2003-08-01 05:28 AM

Enjoyed...James

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

17 posted 2003-08-02 01:26 AM

Hello all...

Lady Moiraine-- I am glad you liked, and you are most welcome.

Mike- Thanks, I am glad you liked.

passing shadow-- You are so right. Thanks for reading.

James Micheal- Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping to read

Hugs,
SharaRose @-->--

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

18 posted 2003-08-02 01:31 AM

Oops Angelblueeyes I meant the comment that I said to Passing shadow (you are so right)for you, and passing shadow I wanted to say ... I am glad this was uplifting for you.. It's a sense of resolve that I came to about a month ago having to do with something about my mother.
I am so sorry girls, and I hope you both will forgive me for this little mix-up. It's hard keeping up with all the comments when you move to the next page to comment. Sorry. Hope i'm forgiven. :'(

Love,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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