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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-30 09:44 AM



My tomorrows
are filled
with my yesterdays,
unspoken times
reincarnated.
My dance card empty
as I lean on the wall,
flower in hand
thoughts dancing on dust.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-07-30 10:17 AM


Oh, Maureen, such ache in so few words. Even though this write is a sad one indeed...I am putting it into my library. hugs to you, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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2 posted 2003-07-30 10:19 AM


Incredibly clever!!!--yet, oh so sad...


Linda

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state of mind
3 posted 2003-07-30 11:12 AM


new dance card, wipe off the dust.
enjoyed

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2003-07-30 11:59 AM


Oh, you have such a way of making me 'see' what you feel.....you really are an artist...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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5 posted 2003-07-30 01:10 PM


SweetWynterGal~
You could convince me of a lot of things ... you being a 'wallflower' NOT being one of them~

Your talent abounds ...

'My tomorrows
are filled
with my yesterdays,
unspoken times
reincarnated.'


And THIS ... soooooooooooooo wistfully beautiful ... just as you are !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-07-30 07:12 PM


One persons wallflower is anothers soul mate...

Susan C.

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7 posted 2003-07-30 07:29 PM


"thoughts dancing on dust."

Gosh, I truly liked how you ended this one.

Sounds like it is almost time for some thorough mind cleaning, to clean out those cobwebs so you can move on.

Great write here, dear Lady.


Patricia
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8 posted 2003-07-30 07:37 PM


Maureen...ahhh, gosh. New memories shall fill your dance card.  It has been one cruel month on the dance floor for me too...but I am looking forward.  My friend, I hope you will too.

An excellent write, felt in my soul.  

Patricia

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9 posted 2003-07-30 08:53 PM


My tomorrows
are filled
with my yesterdays,
unspoken times
reincarnated.


*big hugs*  beautifully written, I hope things get better

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (07-30-2003 08:53 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-07-31 02:49 AM


life's too short M

get out there and dance!

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11 posted 2003-07-31 02:52 AM


My dance card empty
as I lean on the wall,
flower in hand
thoughts dancing on dust.


Oh, M...I just don't know what to say.  
Here's a heart hug for you, sweet lady  
Ethel

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