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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-07-30 09:27 AM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-30 09:31 AM


--and I'll read and enjoy your lyrics no matter how you may put them on a page!


Linda

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-07-30 09:50 AM


Marge,
Reads good to me.

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-07-30 09:56 AM


As they always enrich us! What a blessing to have this each day to come to.

SharaRose @Q-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kethry
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4 posted 2003-07-30 09:58 AM


Ah just what a noddy like me likes.
@ _{
@  }

Keth


Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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5 posted 2003-07-30 10:18 AM


Marge, I love the way you do all these different
shapes of poems. They are so unique and so
pretty. Thanks for putting them here for us to see.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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Patricia
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6 posted 2003-07-30 10:23 AM


Marge, I love this!  I needed the smile you provided with your lyrics...a wonderful treat this morning!

Patricia

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7 posted 2003-07-30 10:23 AM


Enjoyed this read
What would we not do without our muse
I am new here
Do come by and see me won't you
Blessings
Blush

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2003-07-30 10:49 AM


Thank you Marge...

regards
sudhir

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9 posted 2003-07-30 10:55 AM


Very pretty Marge...love the presentation.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2003-07-30 11:24 AM


This is great!!!!  What a unique idea, but then, the poetess who wrote this is one of Passion's best...so I'm not surprised!! Loved it, Marge...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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11 posted 2003-07-30 12:28 PM


This should be your signature poem Marge.  Lovely and you.  Joyce
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12 posted 2003-07-30 12:50 PM


I always read and you'll always touch my heart, no matter
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13 posted 2003-07-30 03:32 PM


Marge, your words will never seem lopsided in my book. No matter which way they flow, they'll always have a glow!

Huggles dear poetess ...

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14 posted 2003-07-30 03:40 PM


Dear Marge:  Cute poem and nothing you do is "lop-sided".  It's always a work of art!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2003-07-30 03:43 PM


Very cute!
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