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the chosen one
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the chosen one |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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hung with disappointment the trees are barely bReathing, they've becOme colorforms, their humanity escapes with the darkness, setting sun blinds the wet grass, its green drains pallid and pale, i am anemic, i've Bled too much the dreamless nights, i ached for you, the sky is mute barEfoot, i dance with my shadow, weeds fill cRacks on cobblestones, barely acknowledged, why do they choose me Their crusader? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-29-2003 11:33 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the weeds have chosen you and the odd beetle on a walkway has chosen me...a somber poem...enjoyed |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hearts never lie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Robert?? Constructed of the finest gold. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no doll, they dont.......oh thats for craig. thanks beetle, glad u could see it. diamond, yes, he is .thanks for reading [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-29-2003 11:41 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - your pen flows deeper with each write... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Bill, sometimes i confuse myself each time i take to the pen, thanks  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful, just beautiful. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And then we get used to it! Just like being blonde, it's not all that it's cracked up to be!! Love ya, hurly girlie~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
downright mournful-- (and I spied a hint to the source, methinks?) I know we don't talk much "m", but I would love to offer you a hug. oh...just here.  You touched my heart lady. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks blondie, wow how do you know i love donovan and just saw him.......the ultmate flowerboy, thanks kauro for stopping in, and k, yes for a witch, it took you a while, hey... dont worry, tho,he'd never keep up anyhow and he knew it....bedies ive got one in hand in my pocket and the other one is playing the piano...in other words, i never run out of supplies......just wish he'd get over me, already , tho i know it must be hard to [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-30-2003 07:03 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele, only now have I seen behind this and it is truly mournful in its beauty xxoo |
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