Open Poetry #27 |
With Every Breath |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My heart whispers your name Can you hear? Can you feel the soft caress of my soul when it touches your face? Do you know the depth of my need to be with you, to share your world? To lie in your love forevermore and weather all the storms in our lives? I have traveled oceans, and skies to reach you, to be the one in your life to give you joy, and peace To find that same peace for all our days and beyond There is a threat that shadows our lives A dark hand that stirs our peaceful waters and lurks from day to day But yet we hold on We stay afloat and together we row to the safety of our future’s shore In the distance we see the warm sands A place where we will be safe from all harm It is such a long way off But still within sight With every breath we glide forward With every breath our dream seems closer With every breath I love you more… Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
With every breath our dream seems closer With every breath I love you more… no other words can express the love better be in love ever. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sunny..i have missed you...glad to see you back...h (hi to the man that makes your music too) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Ambrish, and it is nice to meet you! I appreciate your reply...~~S~~ Hi James, and thank you...always glad to see you here, but you know that I hope!! ~~S~~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi 1slick_lady...oh, I have been lurking, but maybe I will come out of the shadows for a bit! Will tell MM you said hi, too...and thank you.........~~S~~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunnyone - you write as well as ever, pray that you are well and happy, as you deserve it... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that's what I call love & loving...and lovely expressions of both. EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet, now how does one achieve such happiness in love? Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi BC, and thank you for the lovely reply, as it's very appreciated...~S~ Hi EA, and it's nice to have you stop by for a read!! Thank you...~S~ Hi Sandra, and I don't have the answer to that really....some days are diamonds, and some days are coal. I think you know what I mean...(and thank you) ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Ahhhhhh .... the soft side of you is always such a pleasure to read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful outpouring of love and devotion. Wonderfully penned. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With every breath I love you more… So very lovely, Sunnyone... my heart knows these words well. *S* |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is such a lovely write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Marge...I appreciate your friendship as well as your lovely replies!! ~S~ Thank you Enchantress...and I am always glad to see you at my corner of the table!! ~S~ Thank you suthern, and they are words that come straight from the heart for the pleasure of sharing...~S~ Thank you bernie, and so glad that you could join me here for a read...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunnyone - so very happy that you have found happiness, and I wish the best to you... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sunnyone...the depth of love gives us both joy and pain...and still we treasure it. Lovely poem! |
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