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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-07-30 04:54 AM



My heart whispers your name
Can you hear?
Can you feel the soft caress of my soul
when it touches your face?
Do you know the depth of my need
to be with you, to share your world?
To lie in your love forevermore
and weather all the storms in our lives?
I have traveled oceans, and skies
to reach you, to be the one in your life
to give you joy, and peace
To find that same peace for all our days
and beyond
There is a threat that shadows our lives
A dark hand that stirs our peaceful waters
and lurks from day to day
But yet we hold on
We stay afloat and together we row
to the safety of our future’s shore
In the distance we see the warm sands
A place where we will be safe from all harm
It is such a long way off
But still within sight
With every breath we glide forward
With every breath our dream seems closer
With every breath I love you more…

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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ambrish
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1 posted 2003-07-30 05:02 AM



With every breath our dream seems closer
With every breath I love you more…

no other words can express the love better
be in love ever.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-07-30 05:09 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2003-07-30 05:11 AM


sunny..i have missed you...glad to see you back...h (hi to the man that makes your music too)
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-07-30 05:13 AM


Thank you Ambrish, and it is nice to meet you! I appreciate your reply...~~S~~

Hi James, and thank you...always glad to see you here, but you know that I hope!!  ~~S~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-07-30 05:15 AM


Hi 1slick_lady...oh, I have been lurking, but maybe I will come out of the shadows for a bit!  Will tell MM you said hi, too...and thank you.........~~S~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-07-30 09:24 AM


Sunnyone - you write as well as ever, pray that you are well and happy, as you deserve it...

BC

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-07-30 09:27 AM


Now that's what I call love & loving...and lovely expressions of both.


EA

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2003-07-30 09:41 AM


Sweet, now how does one achieve such happiness in love?
Sandra

Sunnyone
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9 posted 2003-07-30 10:33 AM


Hi BC, and thank you for the lovely reply, as it's very appreciated...~S~

Hi EA, and it's nice to have you stop by for a read!!  Thank you...~S~

Hi Sandra, and I don't have the answer to that really....some days are diamonds, and some days are coal.  I think you know what I mean...(and thank you) ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-07-30 01:26 PM


SunnyOne~
Ahhhhhh .... the soft side of you is always such a pleasure to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-07-30 01:29 PM


A beautiful outpouring of love and devotion.
Wonderfully penned.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

suthern
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12 posted 2003-07-31 02:39 PM


With every breath I love you more…

So very lovely, Sunnyone... my heart knows these words well. *S*

bslicker
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13 posted 2003-07-31 03:11 PM


This is such a lovely write

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sunnyone
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14 posted 2003-07-31 04:51 PM


Thank you Marge...I appreciate your friendship as well as your lovely replies!! ~S~

Thank you Enchantress...and I am always glad to see you at my corner of the table!! ~S~

Thank you suthern, and they are words that come straight from the heart for the pleasure of sharing...~S~

Thank you bernie, and so glad that you could join me here for a read...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2003-07-31 08:54 PM


Sunnyone - so very happy that you have found happiness, and I wish the best to you...

BC

Martie
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16 posted 2003-07-31 10:13 PM


sunnyone...the depth of love gives us both joy and pain...and still we treasure it.  Lovely poem!
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