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Peace (for littlewing)
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Peace (for littlewing) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am pacing off the steps deaf to murmered mutterings knowledge of the incomplete as if my footprints mean something lipstick smudged upon a glass and gloss upon the filtered cigs piling up the crystal tray to keep my offerings of ash... There she is and there she ain't-- I ponder means of hunt and trap. I am Artemis concede that peace is freedom from my grasp... She is finale'-- mystery achievement that can't be achieved-- the grace of written promises which can't be had by works or deed. Listen I just heard her sing, there between the willow's weep thoughts that are too hard to think in drift from bough to ground... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Listen I just heard her sing, there between the willow's weep thoughts that are too hard to think in drift from bough to ground..." Smiling at you...  I KNEW you could do it...and you did it beautifully, and in true 'Serenity' style. Love this, lady...and love YOU.  "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Listen I just heard her sing, there between the willow's weep thoughts that are too hard to think in drift from bough to ground... ~*~ You rock! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damn K - I hear her too . . . Knew you would do this with your finesse and grace, as always and I must bow to you I would have had an extremely hard time with this myself You far exceeded and always write off the shoulder - from a view many of us dont see Only from your eyes . . . thank you - I know it wasnt easy *still finding patience* grrr LOL xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic! Take a well deserved bow K! Hugs YOU! ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed this piece of peace!   EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-30-2003 09:38 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So pretty! Both of you. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karen, Very well written. I heard her singing for the first time in my life a little over a year ago.... Susan C. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
oh this is .... hushed beauty dew on web in moonlight mmmmmm I love when you write like this |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I feel this one K. library for sure insanity is not a crime |
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