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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2003-07-30 01:14 AM


I have never felt so fresh
as if I am springing from a garden
picking and choosing
flashing hearts of romaine
drizzled and tossed
serving me up like a lady~

~for you~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-30-2003 01:38 AM).]

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Janette
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1 posted 2003-07-30 01:21 AM


Nice ... crisp ... and oh so refreshing ... such a deliteful summer write ... drizzle and toss works for me.

"He" should gobble this one up ... quickly.

GREAT offering you give to us this evening ... enjoyed!

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2 posted 2003-07-30 01:28 AM


Fresh, indeed!
Great write

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3 posted 2003-07-30 01:32 AM


Mmmmmm....that's all sparkly! Have fresh fun!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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4 posted 2003-07-30 02:01 AM


Wow, Ms Blues..this is indeed a beautiful offering.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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5 posted 2003-07-30 02:17 AM


Well heck, a salad never tasted so good, or left me feeling so giddy!!!

Thank you, Janette, Kaoru, Mr. Ratleader, and sweet Maree, I'm so happy now!

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6 posted 2003-07-30 08:32 AM



catalinamoon
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7 posted 2003-07-30 09:45 AM


What a refreshing way to say this.
Sandra

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8 posted 2003-07-30 10:29 AM


Hi Bluesygirl !! A perfect little write this is. Love it! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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9 posted 2003-07-30 10:29 AM



Save me some, pretty please! I swear, someday I am going to turn into a bunny!

This poem is a pause that refreshes! Delightful as you are!


Linda

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10 posted 2003-07-30 11:21 AM


Duncan     I'm trying to save face.

Sandra~ Thanks so much for reading.

Good morning to you Chris, and thank you.
I like it when you call me Bluesygal~    

Linda~ What a nice thing to say, you really are an angel.  Thanks.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-30-2003 11:55 PM).]

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11 posted 2003-07-30 11:29 AM


Who needs a main course with a salad as delightful and crispy fresh as this?? I'm headed for the market now to capture the Romaine...see what you started??!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2003-07-30 01:51 PM


Thank you Sunnyone~
I could have the special everyday and never get tired of it!!  But in the the end, I was mixing it up, and ruined a good thing.  I will be sure to order for myself next time.   hmmmmph!!!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-30-2003 10:26 PM).]

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-07-30 03:38 PM


Whoo - hoooo Bluesy . . .
nice to see you singing again
I have missed your lovely voice
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2003-07-30 03:54 PM


Very nice.


Susan C.

BluesSerenade
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15 posted 2003-07-30 10:21 PM


Well damn! Thank you tweets...
I'm back into my blue mode,
It's safer there.

Susan~ Thanks for stopping by,
I appreciate it very much!

Duncan
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16 posted 2003-07-30 10:34 PM


Wanna see how persistant a pest I can be Bluesy?????  
ThisDiamond
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17 posted 2003-07-30 10:40 PM


What a picture this is...
made my heart smile.
Applause! TD

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18 posted 2003-07-30 11:05 PM


Wow, what a difference a little mixing up
of "salad" can do for the spirits.

Love this smile you're wearing here, Bluesygal.
Hugs to ya  
Ethel

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19 posted 2003-07-30 11:30 PM


Loved this.Noone can compare to the freshness of you.You're an amazing poetess.
angelblueyes

Duncan
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20 posted 2003-07-31 12:15 PM


What kinda Goob writes a poem about lettuce????  
Duncan
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21 posted 2003-07-31 12:30 PM


That was a joke...btw.  (Is something wrong with your email?)
passing shadows
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22 posted 2003-07-31 01:30 AM


nice feeling ain't it? you've described it well!
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23 posted 2003-07-31 09:24 PM


I love romaine...guess you are in the Northeast by now..hope you are having a wonderful time...

hugss
M

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24 posted 2003-07-31 09:34 PM


great poem. keep on writting.


Martie
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25 posted 2003-07-31 10:05 PM


I thought I replied to this earlier, Lori...Loved it!  Your salad has many layers.  
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