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Prayers often empty-senryu's |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I stand at the cross and say the words of routine Does he hear this time? I kneel, and forget in a moment why i'm here Prayers often empty He replies, with a Question, did you ask what you just wanted to hear? [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-15-2003 06:21 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
read the tao........you are ready nice write, tho |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Very interesting, I liked it. I like how to-the-point it is. Nixa, Laq |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed your Q, and the thought process. Some will say the answer was always there, you just need to be listening. And some may say there is no answer, and the question is meaningless. But what is Jason seeking? an answer, or another chance to re-phrase the question as the circumstances of life change? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You are surprising me Jason I like that and this is awesome Your answer lies within you listen . . . Happy Father's Day xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-16-2003 12:48 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Michelle, I will read up on it, I have come to realize I lack wisdom since posting here. Laqe, thank you. Kacy, Well said, I wonder how many times over the years I have rephrased the questions. Sue, Did I catch you by suprise?, I am rereading to see what I wrote differant to catch you. Thank you for the Happy fathers day My little girls made my world today. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason your welcome you deserve it a great Father and yes you surprised me You have been abusing your muse needlessly for weeks now (btw I wanted to call Social Services lmao) and here I see this gem of a write *smile* Surprised no more like proud xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Poem! Are you talking to god? I am confused lol ARCTIC WIND |
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