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0 posted 2003-07-29 04:26 PM







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Please love me to-day
Our future is uncertain
Wrap me in your arms
Calm my fears with solemn vows
Kiss me into to-morrow
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Chris Barker
July 2003
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© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-29 04:28 PM



Brava!
Picture perfect!

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2 posted 2003-07-29 04:34 PM


Lovely lovely...
Enjoyed the sound of that Chris..
Kiss me into tomorrow...nice!
~Smiles, Hugs, Love & Miss Ya, Teed~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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3 posted 2003-07-29 05:02 PM


Thanks and hugs Karilea & Nancylee!!
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4 posted 2003-07-29 05:28 PM


NightShade~
This is just so very, very lovely~
Poetic perfection~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2003-07-29 05:37 PM


Hi Chris ~~ Perfection in word, thought and the picture. Not often do I see tanka's and yours was just the best!

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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6 posted 2003-07-29 08:22 PM


Aww yes, the uncertainty of it all!
I hope he loves you longer than that Chris~

Your heart speaks to me, in whispers.

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7 posted 2003-07-29 09:15 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2003-07-29 09:45 PM


Marge, Marti, Bluesy & vandana, thankyou dear poet friends for reading and commenting.
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