Open Poetry #27 |
Into To-morrow (tanka) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
. . . Please love me to-day Our future is uncertain Wrap me in your arms Calm my fears with solemn vows Kiss me into to-morrow . . . Chris Barker July 2003 ~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brava! Picture perfect! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely... Enjoyed the sound of that Chris.. Kiss me into tomorrow...nice! ~Smiles, Hugs, Love & Miss Ya, Teed~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks and hugs Karilea & Nancylee!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightShade~ This is just so very, very lovely~ Poetic perfection~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Chris ~~ Perfection in word, thought and the picture. Not often do I see tanka's and yours was just the best! Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww yes, the uncertainty of it all! I hope he loves you longer than that Chris~ Your heart speaks to me, in whispers. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge, Marti, Bluesy & vandana, thankyou dear poet friends for reading and commenting. |
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