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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-07-29 03:07 PM

TWENTY OR LESS...#126

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


learned hands
touch

soft voice
reassuring

comforting eyes
smile
gently
upon your needs


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cusick
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1 posted 2003-07-29 03:29 PM

So much said in so few words. I may be wrong but I detect  Deep religeous undertones. Maggie
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-07-29 04:12 PM

Hi Maggie.  The beauty of this style is that there is no "wrong", and that's why they're fun to write -- they're like a "poetic Rohrschach Test" to see what interpretations others will have...  So, yes, yours is a possibility...  Thank you for your thoughts.

-MVS

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