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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-15 04:58 PM

The reasons
behind the madness
lie thick and pulsing

I have measured
that methods conditioned upon me
were survival instinct

I am future, fairytale life
carving mistakes into beloveds veins

For her, always for her

Fresh realisation
sits hopeful in my cycle of discontent

Dismount
or fall.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-15 05:28 PM

I am future, fairytale life
carving mistakes into beloveds veins

Nice lines, great poem gemma~

Laqe
Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 72
Michigan, US

2 posted 2003-06-15 06:47 PM

I really like your style, keep it up. Beautiful poem.

Nixa,
Laq

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-06-15 07:14 PM

May your Discontent soon Disolve ...

... just Dis-ing!!

True hearts hold no discontent.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-16 12:11 PM

Dismount
or fall.

I can't see you falling you're too bright and one day..sigh one day yes it will all fall into place..right? right...I think..we can dream

When you stop dreaming it's time to die - Shannon Hoon

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-16 03:42 AM

cool write

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

6 posted 2003-06-16 04:00 AM

always enjoy writing your wonderful poems keep it up

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-06-16 04:47 AM

Very good writing, Gemma, girl...

Hugs

Ethel Mae

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-06-16 07:50 AM

Stunnning.
Eric

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2003-06-16 07:53 AM

nice,like it.
Thanks for the words.

Goldenrose.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-06-16 08:09 AM

thanks for the replies everyone, this was something i feel is pretty crappy, i had so much to say, but didnt know how to get it all out, which is actually the basis of my problems at the mo. one step at a time and all that.

thanks for listen to my muddled thoughts. i appreciate u all so much friends.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-06-17 04:39 AM

dreams x reality - faith = futility

xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-02-07 09:23 AM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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