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And What Continues...
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And What Continues... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We approach the still point of each other. There is no hesitation...no movement unsure to our touch. It is as if greater hands than ours have traced the lines of this caress. We simply follow. And yet we are slow in our arrivial. There is no hurry...no final point of destination. There is only this - The coming together of one flesh. And what continues...after. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Aww, this is so beautifully done. The merging of two to become one. Lovely write.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely presented... much enjoyed your words today. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
There you are! I have missed your writing. It is even better than I remember. How long has it been? Seems like forever! Beautiful work! Patricia |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
good to see you m friend. where have u been? liked this silky smooth write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is a fine piece of art Ericc~ You've painted a timeless kind of love here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, you are becoming one of Passions most passionate. Enjoyed the sensual feel of this write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
where have you been????? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh how I have missed you here . . . this is refreshing as they all are xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc You have a way of making a complex feeling, simple yet extraordinary. A fine talent. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - yes, and what continues after... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very nice! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice to see you back here with your exquisite poetry .... your pen reveals sacred lines traced by Love. Love, Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Oh, that is beautiful... profound and beautiful. Wow. I love you, Moca |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Oh my. Yeah, I'm loving it! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and even if you freeze for a moment after, what continues is just pure charm! (big hugggssssssss) Let yourself pause in loves moment like The Matrix, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-17-2003 10:01 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Eric, I am happy to see Arctic Wind touched on your exquisite poem today! Please consider this an invitation to come back sharing your wondrous poetry, will you? The pause has been long enough! I love you. Margherita  |
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