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Poe-Pot-Pie's Challenge - Crab Bait
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Poe-Pot-Pie's Challenge - Crab Bait |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ok, I've had this crab bait jingle in my head for a couple months, it has nothing to do with my personal life! I hope it's odd and funny and enjoyable enough to meet the challenge! ~K~ Love can sometimes just go out of style Losing flame to familiarity I thought he still called me his true soul mate Then I listened, he’s been callin’ me Ol’ Crab Bait! Maybe I’ve grown too complacent and comfy I gave my everything over the years But he chose me first, and I was his soul mate So how long has he been calling me Ol’ Gross Weight? I recently heard him telling old man stories And yukkin’ it up with the guys That’s when I learned that his lifelong soul mate Had been renamed Just Another Ol’ Blind Date. So now he has his second love A newer match lighting the flame Maybe he should mark their beginning By naming her Fresh Crab Bait... And maybe she won't see the cage.... [This message has been edited by Kahlil (07-29-2003 12:01 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lol, I don't know what the challenge was but it sounds like you met it well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Laugh Challenge well met. I'm sure Poe will be proud. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy to hear it has nothing to do with your personal life! Your sense of humor shines through in this one!   EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
haha, you guys, thanks for your replies, it was kinda weird, but fun to write it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Funny, but sad, too. Because too often men are foolish enough to act that way... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, El C, I did have enough personal experience for inspiration. ;-) ~K~ |
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