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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-28 06:31 PM


I'll Wait For You My Love

Yes, I desire to see the
feminine shape of her back
and of course I wish to
view her luscious breast
but the softness
of her heart
is the part
that I love
the best.

JamesLee
July28
2003


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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-07-28 07:06 PM


The heart is what matters most....glad that you see what is important in a woman...not physical beauty, but what is on the inside that counts!

Thanks~ARH

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2003-07-28 07:08 PM


You hopeless romantic James!  I love your style and your way with words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-28 07:36 PM


Thank you Romantic Heart and Suetang...I wouldn't know where to begin without the heart...James
Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
4 posted 2003-07-28 08:03 PM


short and sweet. Quite romantic.
Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-07-28 08:13 PM


See? Now, here you are writing so romantically that I sit back and just sigh. lol. Told ya!! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
6 posted 2003-07-28 10:32 PM


James Michael...This is one of my favorites of yours. I like it because it speaks of the heart and the beauty of the person inside the body. ***Ivy Rose
Janette
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Chicagoland for now
7 posted 2003-07-28 10:57 PM


What woman could resist this?  

*sigh*

Perfect.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-29 04:19 AM



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