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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I hover in thoughts over found photograph of your hand carefree trust in prints not the most beautiful thing yellowed cigarette worn nails bitten to bone you don't know how they felt to me strum of guitar ink upon your pages held soul belief unwashed promises I should retract mine. Instant karma's gonna get you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (07-28-2003 10:25 AM).] |
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Ramon Junior Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 28 |
what's 'retact'? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you know what? I dunno. a spelling mistake.  thanks. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Another incredible poem! I'm not surprised, hee hee  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
retact...heh. Doesn't know how much pain he's caused.. But then again, it makes you write stuff like this. you allways hit hard how they felt to me strum of guitar ink upon your pages i never quote but i loved these lines |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Do you ever wonder what this might be preparing us for? Do you ever wonder and realize the chances we've taken? And to love as you have...is an experience all in it's own...something most do not ever even touch on...someday...this person will be very abruptly awakened to the lose in you...and then, it may be to late. But...in the end...I believe it all works out hte way it's supposed to, despite what we want...our needs are filled. God bless you always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
retact retract just do it..hugs |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A wonderful poem. My first real lover (at least a thousand years ago) taught me that hands can speak and make music that reaches inside the soul. Thank you. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh yes ... there is just something about a man's hands that get to me everytime ... sheeesh ... I can relate to this one ... strongly. Great read here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love reading you gemma...I can really relate |
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