3rd eye blinded,..for those who cant see it coming

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Open Poetry #27

3rd eye blinded,..for those who cant see it coming

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-28 12:45 PM

on tuesdays trash
my feet catch rainbows,
mud littered colors
are they any less the glorious?

rusted old rooftops
bombed-out Bronx zone,
does the song of the rainfall
play any less symphonic?

roadside, sideshow
flowers born on imaginations' sown,
a fool's gold? but dreaming girls know
for whom these ugly weeds grow,

dare you catch it
as it enters?

as you long for it
it has found you,

starlight,moonbright

feel it now, life's short,

or hear its swansong,

as you bleed your life out

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-28-2003 04:44 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-28 01:59 PM

This is beautiful

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-07-28 02:09 PM

Jesus Michele . . .

feel it now, life's short,

or watch it
sing its swansong,

as you bleed your life out

watch it pass by or grab it when it comes
I love how you think
truly amazing
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-29 04:49 AM

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-29 10:06 AM

Yep, Michele...some people are so busy
lookinf for IT that they
don't grab it when it hits them in the face!
They let it just go right on past them. :

Hugs

Ethel

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-29 10:15 AM

yes, despitethe blood n guts you may spill whilst grabbing hold of life and living, its better than bleeding yourself dry in boredom and inexperience.

michele, you always make me think too much. and re evaluate. after the for john and sylvia, you had myhead in a spin, and now so does this. and thats why I love ya.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

6 posted 2003-07-30 02:47 PM

Hey its me with my first post...as usual Michele, full of emotion and from your heart but i can't agree more that life is short and everyone must make the most to enjoy every day (a little Passion and Fun)as much as possible and in any way possible!

Jeff

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-07-30 03:23 PM

your right of course and on any given day i'd agree but its all easier said..it's the doing and you know i do things the hard way..grin

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2003-07-30 05:45 PM

Interesting!

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