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Open Poetry #27

I don't want to wake up

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-07-28 10:07 AM

I see your shy face
When I close my eyes in dream
Gone when I awake

"No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-07-28 10:10 AM

I like this, but i feel the opposite, wishing i could wake up, and stop dreaming about someone i want to forget.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

2 posted 2003-07-28 10:14 AM

This is a problem when you have lost a loved one. A lot said in so few words.

Ramon
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since 2003-07-22

Posts 28

3 posted 2003-07-28 10:19 AM

Great haiku

Bec
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since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

4 posted 2003-07-30 07:50 PM

Hi Amature2...

I really like this. I agree with cusick, there is a lot said in those few lines. But keep soldiering on, it gets easier every day.

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2003-07-30 08:10 PM

I tend to do the same as what gemjop stated but still this was a fun read.

Enjoyed.

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2003-07-30 08:11 PM

I tend to do the same as what gemjop stated but still this was a fun read.

Enjoyed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-31 02:56 AM

sigh

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-07-31 03:19 AM

love your short but honest words..
Though, I ditto Gem.

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