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Vanity, Sanity and beauty parlor blues
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Vanity, Sanity and beauty parlor blues |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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they are 50's relics on heads of the future, grey metal cirlces filled with saturday faces, they are seats of girlchatter first love thru marraige shattered, they wear decades of womanhood with piled up hairspray and boobjobs, they hold secrets of sisterhood, and still clinging vanity, i sit there a barbiedoll, bleached out and brainless, filled up with kafka, as i sit seeking buddha, i rewind to my first time thick in a beehive, a l4 years old's promdance, now nearing 50 (i know, couldnt be me, right  i'd love to go unpainted, blank as a canvas, bald as an babys butt, but what sugardaddy would want me? maybe i'll just lose it, but for now i want pretty, one day i will free her, but not before, the first facelift [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-27-2003 10:37 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
i'd love to go unpainted, blank as a canvas, bald as a babys butt, but what sugardaddy would want me? you are delusional . . . but I do know how you feel It's usually the days of no makeup , hair undone that you happen to see someone looking right at you and think, "Oh God - this isnt really me, I swear!" In my humble opinion, you are beautiful as you are Michele, as are your words xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
i'd love to go unpainted, blank as a canvas, bald as an babys butt, but what sugardaddy would want me? Michele, I love this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A woman recently told me she wouldn't let anyone see her with her wakeup face...and now I want to...James |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it made me smile the mysterious inner world of women arthur |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
i'd love to go unpainted, blank as a canvas, ahh the joys. Enjoyed this very much and especially love the lines above. Maree fate is not just |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Lady, this is wonderful. I was going to quote...but I would have to quote so much of this treasure. Wonderfully honest look at myself in your words! Patricia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you sue, that is real sweet of you ethel..glad you loved it james...just dont let her know youre looking arthur.....yes its a foreign world to the men out there, i am sure maree...yes some days i do and just go for it pat...yes, that's me allright, |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"bald as an babys butt" Surely NOT ... you would not wish to be bald, would you? Hahhaha! And I am right there with you girl friend, in line for the face lift ... to come in the not so distant future. (sounds like we are close in age ... *wink*) Vain ... Nanhhhhhhhh just trying to stay sane ... right? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you and me both, lady |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Bald as a baby's butt.....cute line but we arent talking about your head are you....terrific imaginary....You could be writing about any of my conquests when I was younger. I enjoyed this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lol@james wakeup face...no, you don't wanna see the wakeup face, trust me had to boot this back up  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is definately interesting, you have a way, you know? |
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