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Come With Me To Paradise
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Come With Me To Paradise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Come with me to paradise Where the water is so blue We'll leave our cares behind us Here our troubles will be few We'll swim in crystal waters And lay beneath the swaying palms The warm winds will embrace us As I lay within your arms We'll watch the golden sun Set beneath the tranquil sea Then we'll walk beneath the moonlight Arm in arm, just you and me * * * "Send love in all directions - North, South, East and West Experience for several dazzling moments how it is to be at the very centre of the universe" I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...as always...wonderful write! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Your poetry always has a nice flow to carry with it a pleasing message. Enjoyed muchly. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue, God I have missed you here Experience for several dazzling moments how it is to be at the very centre of the universe" What an experience indeed xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, this whole post is mesmerizing and is a  ... I love it beyond words!   Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oopsadaisy!....Now, it's SAVED! I couldn't let this beauty slip by! |
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