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Hope (challenge) |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Ok, so it wasn't too painful.  This was my challenge to reverse my writing style. I got hope. Those of you who know me can imagine my distress. At any rate, here it is, in all its shining mediocrity. lol... enjoy. “Hold on,” they say, “Life is long, and so much time is still to come, and there are still so many opportunities.” They tell me that I’m gifted. I wouldn’t know... not even if they broadcast me on the six o’clock news, but then, I always have been blind to my potential. To be honest, I’m usually wrong. Usually they’re all right, and maybe this is no exception... The possibility is an enchanting one... intoxicating, and it smells like lavender... Maybe I’ll try it, just once, this holding on, because life is long. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... [This message has been edited by Kielo (07-27-2003 09:33 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kielo!!!! challenge met! Hope was hard wasnt it? But you shine here with the last line Thank you and I much enjoyed reading you hopeful. Today LOL xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-27-2003 10:07 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words were "intoxicating" and smelled like "lavender" which is an essential 'healing' oil...  Well done, Kielo!  EA |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
littlewing, yes it was hard, thank you, and for someone who I don't recall talking to all that much, you know me very well.... LOL Although I suppose that poem makes it quite obvious... lol.... at any rate, thank you. Earth Angel, thank you. I don't really like the lavender line.... I like it on its own, but I don't think it fits. It could just be me, but what do you think? And thank you again, very much.  Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kielo: no thank you and your words are full of hope even the lavender - especially that I read, that is how I know Glad you did this |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*bugs* you're beautiful  |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
littlewing, thank you very much, again, and, if you insist, you're welcome. Skyfire..... Old news, isn't it? Honestly, though..... thank you very much. Try and guess how much that means to me. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hope... heh..try happines. It's practicaly impossible. Great job..potential.. what do they do, give you a "potential test?" they tell me the same thing  sigh.. what do we do next? insanity is not a crime |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The possibility is an enchanting one... intoxicating, and it smells like lavender Awesome write. You met the challenge very well indeed. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wind.... *grin* I know the feeling And thank you Nightshade.... thank you very much. I've been asking around outside of Passions, too, and it does seem that people like the lavender line.... *shrug* Like I said, I'm usually wrong! Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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