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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-27 09:11 PM



Every
word
~meant~
is
now
~felt~
ten fold
but
opposite
to
the way
I
thought
I
would.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-07-27 09:29 PM


All those words we rewind over and over..sigh
Amazing gem amazing

Kielo
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2 posted 2003-07-27 09:34 PM


*nod* I know how this feels.

Hugs to you

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-07-27 09:42 PM


words words words, dont always tell it all, i know
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2003-07-27 09:44 PM


Backwards is only one of many directions.

       Time will show them.


  Remember, the sky is the limit!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-07-27 09:56 PM


Gem - exactly my thoughts

opposite
to
the way
I
thought
I
would.

xxoo

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-07-27 10:27 PM


I'm always trying to wrap my mind around your words! You get me thinking!

I have to read your poetry to hone my brain! lol


EA

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2003-07-28 01:28 AM


Gem, this is just so..free from the burden of

those line breaks that everyone's used to..

I love this, library material, indeed.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-28 03:17 AM


very cool gemma
Wind
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9 posted 2003-07-28 11:15 AM


I'm the little forum cop,
come to bump this to the top

only tou can make so few words be this great..well you and Raphy

insanity is not a crime

gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA
10 posted 2003-07-28 11:24 AM


LoL! Liz. have I ever told you I love ya kid? That rhyme had me nearly peeing my knickers.
insanity is not a crime no. tidying ones bedroom should be.  

AND,

Thankyou all for the beautiful replies, you all are tooooooooooo sweet.

and it makes me feel better to know i'm not alone in this feeling.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Wind
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11 posted 2003-07-28 11:53 AM


did ya wet your knickers girl ahh...I'm turning british. I called my mom "mum" today and she gave me a strange look and told me that that strange music is gettin at my brain. yeah...I like my bumping rhyme. Just watch..somewhere in the future, everyone will be using that and only we will know that i inventd it. haha

What are ya doing in your library?

I  like my new sig..but never be normal is still my fav..


insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-28-2003 12:05 PM).]

skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
12 posted 2003-07-28 12:11 PM


I have to say I've felt the same thing.....

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Janette
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13 posted 2003-07-28 11:20 PM


A mystery never solved ... I have done this plenty times, too.

Lady, you expressed this so very well ... mercy you are good!

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