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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-27 04:41 PM


beneath layers
of ancient stone
hope smolders still
a latent supernova

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-07-27 04:42 PM


no,

you are beauty
untold

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-07-27 04:48 PM


Your supernova can't be contained ...
powerful image!
Love, Margherita

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-07-27 04:58 PM


thanks red yer the greatest

Margherita sperriamo, one day

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-07-27 05:05 PM


ahhhh was waiting for this
Challenge met beautifully

Your star will shine
go listen to it please

even in the midst of ashes
there lies hope . . .
Thank you Raphael

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-27-2003 05:11 PM).]

Wind
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5 posted 2003-07-27 05:48 PM


hehehe... sorry.. you're just so "pretty and bright" lol..can't stop..

brattiness aside: well done sir. wish it coulda been longer

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-07-27 05:56 PM


Wonderfully crafted...excellent write!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-07-27 06:34 PM



Exactly!
You finally described
the way I've been
seeing
YOU!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-07-27 06:44 PM


And once you break through all that bedrock, you are going to burst into the most magnificent super nova ever! Rise and shine, Dear One!


EA

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
9 posted 2003-07-27 07:23 PM


One day you will find me, caught beneath the landsliiiide, like a champagne supernova in the sky.

The gallaghers would be proud. So am I. you typed the H word!

xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

vandana
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10 posted 2003-07-27 07:30 PM


enjoyed
Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
11 posted 2003-07-27 09:27 PM


It's about damn time that you wrote something like this ....this really is awesome...
And ahem! Helen, he's also exotic too! Nope, Raph, you can't shut lil' ole me up!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
12 posted 2003-07-27 09:53 PM


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beneath layers
of ancient stone
hope smolders still
a latent supernova

yes, its there, still, raffi
your picture is freaking me out, when i open your page..is there another  half out there somewhere

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
13 posted 2003-07-27 10:32 PM


Thanks Sue maybe

Liz longer? be thankful i could even push this out

Thanks Nancy

Karilea thanks, um y'all need glasses grins

Linda thanks too sweet

Gem thanks grin and if the gallaghers were ever proud who would know? i cant understand a friggin word they say

thanks vandana

Exotic, bugs and flus are also exotic M, but thanks for the reply

Mish my picture freaks me out too

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