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Open Poetry #27

Eternal Rhythm

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

0 posted 2003-07-27 02:58 PM

Worlds revolve around their suns
Trapped with in an eternal rhythm,
Lost with in a universe of chaos,
Beyond help,
Void of time,
Spinning like tops unable to
Stop their endless turning,
Flames continuously fueled by
The constant hate from their surfaces,
The short meaningless lives begin and end,
Begin and end,
Sometimes even in the same moment,
A single breath,
A single heart beat,
Thump,
....
Worlds revolve around their suns
Trapped with in an eternal rhythm.

~*Summer*~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-07-27 05:33 PM

Worlds revolve around their suns
Trapped with in an eternal rhythm.

~*~

Oh, do I know/feel/breathe/taste this...

Thank you!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

2 posted 2003-07-27 10:29 PM

a ponder poem, well done.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-08-01 01:55 AM

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

4 posted 2003-08-01 01:57 AM

Beyond help,
Void of time,
Spinning like tops unable to
Stop their endless turning,
_________
ever thought of just leaving the explanation
_______
Beyond help,
Void of time,
Spinning like tops

_________
beautifull poem...

Mike

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-08-01 02:03 AM

You've got me thinking.
angelblueyes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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6 posted 2003-08-01 05:14 AM

thump

a great write

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