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Shades Of Autumn |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
My silent steps trespass the still Autmn meadow. Nimbus clouds lean low as my tears blend with the rain, washing the earth. Does she hear the Ave I breathe? Will my soft words warm her? Sleep in peace my love. Soon the door will open and by your side I will slumber forever. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Cusick. Have to tell you that your user name is part of my history. Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting! Looking forward to more poetry from you - and thank you so much for commenting on mine! FYI - the "she" in "Outside the Box" is completely fictional. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing this poignant, well written entrance.   |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ghostly & haunting in a distant-memory-kind-of-way... Welcome to our dreamscape. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
cusick, this is a very good first post. I look forward to seeing much more of your work. I hope that you like it here at Passions and..  Hugs to you  Ethel/garysgirl |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you all for being so kind. I was a bit nervous after reading your lovely poems. Sunshine, I am curious how you are conected with Cusacks. It is not a common name.Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you all for being so kind. I was a bit nervous after reading your lovely poems. Sunshine, I am curious how you are conected with Cusacks. It is not a common name.Maggie |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passion's, I must say this gave me an eery feeling, yet, it blooms wit possibilty...these last lines in particular touched a place I thought I'd forgotten within myself.... Sleep in peace my love. Soon the door will open and by your side I will slumber forever. Thank you for sharing! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
An amazing entrance welcome to the blue |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
agreed...I loved the images in this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
cusick: beautiful entrance Does she hear the Ave I breathe? ahhh just song to words, my friend I know she does Welcome to PIP! xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions  enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions! I see we have something in common besides poetry--dolphins!  Ethereal, dreamy poem! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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