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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Loose Thread I pulled a thread in my heart and Unraveled a sensitive part Raw to the touch, sore to the dream A thread that opened a seam A tone was set, a step of woe On which my dragon stubbed his toe And smoke and fire belched in cry And angry red stained his eye And from the roaring came a flood Dammed up brine that turned to blood That rang out in an echoes cry And turned the sky to livid lie. Thunder splashed and lightning flashed And crashed to jagged thoughts backlash Stained the pallor of my skin And turned my thinking into spin Reared a hydra’s head of verse That ended in a stream of curse That sent me into wiles of Hyde Actions that I could not abide It opened up Pandora’s box Set free once more the paradox. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love being on your wavelength; we almost posted simulataneously - so there is no way I read this before posting mine...but I guess the muses are at work, and just didn't change theme... LOL... Good morning Sy!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta watch those heart strings, Sy - They protect a lifetime of stuff, ya know??.. I really love this piece - yep, I do...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sunday morning read Sy! Very much enjoyed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Yes we are on the some wave length.  Nan Thank you my love. Nancy, Thank you dear be right there for tea. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - my goodness, what a write this morning! How do you manage? Each day is a new beginning I know - but - I guess your muse has no need of rest. Unlike some of us whose muses often vacate their homes totally!! lol. Toast and blueberry jam with tea? lovely.  hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I pulled a thread in my heart and Unraveled a sensitive part Raw to the touch, sore to the dream A thread that opened a seam A tone was set, a step of woe On which my dragon stubbed his toe And smoke and fire belched in cry And angry red stained his eye Wow Seymour...that dragon of yours does get touchey, huh? LOL  Another excellent thought-provoking poem this morning, friend  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, It's your love, generousity and muffens that does it. Ethel If you weren't given to another I would look your way. LOL |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
gosh, I love this...into my library... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil Gosh I love you and into my thank you, you go. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you for this read, Sy -- rich and powerful this imagery, and the cadence/rhyme a touch different for you...? -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such a wonderful piece...loved the theme |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, I'm pleased no end you liked the piece. Passing, Wonderful says alot. |
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