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Table For Two
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Table For Two |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot 
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Soft candles glowing, chilled bottle of wine A window's magnificent view The smells of the dinner are simply sublime There's a single red rose on the table for two... No reservations required in advance The lady alone waits for you Her perfume and gown hint at later romance But it all has it's start at the table for two... It's an everyday table you bought long ago That is used in your everyday life Tonight it's transformed and she hopes you will know That she's still so much more than an everyday wife! Into the house so familiar, but yet You sense there is something amiss The soft music plays but it's tune you forget As you're led to the table by way of a kiss... Mystery plays in the smile on her lips Her plans are a secret to you She reaches across with her soft fingertips And the night comes alive at the table for two... I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Softly romantic! I love your table for two ... and it should be like that, we can do more out of our everyday tables. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Ah, thank you, Margherita, and that table has a way of bringing back the romance!! Glad you enjoyed....~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simplicity is in the eye of the beholder... and this is simply beautiful! |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Thank you, Sunshine...just a little fantasy from my muse, bless her heart!!!! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice romantic thoughts...James |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Your fantasy went on a rampage with this one. Beautiful - just beautifully romantic. I can picture the bottle of wine, candle light and music. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm! Ariana |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh, I want a sit at this table. Lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and she is always a Lady... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a lesson for me...so old now I forgot...thanks for reminding |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
VOE... This one was beautiful. I guess there are times when we start to take our partners for granted. But it's a nice surprise to be reminded like this! Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
There are few skills as beautiful as making an everyday object into one of beauty and romance. Great write! I enjoyed reading this. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very hopeful that even these less than thrilling relationships have a chance for romance. Sandra |
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