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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-26 09:42 PM


Morning

Morning spoke
In gold and green
And I awoke
Dew wet
The scene
              
Lay there
In a dreamers revel
Raised my hands
And cursed
The devil



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-26 09:48 PM


THERE you are....
I was beginning to...
withdraw!


Nan
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2 posted 2003-07-26 09:50 PM


Who are you and what have you done with Sy???... Sy posts in the morning - and writes verses with couplets at the end... You're posting at night - but at least it's ABOUT the morning???...

Yeah Sy...

Nightshade
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3 posted 2003-07-26 09:51 PM


Seymour!! Oh, thank heavens!!! I have missed your writings. Let's see....it's late..but oh well, a tiny piece of apple pie can't hurt. Now where is Enchantress with the tea? hugs to you dear sir, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-07-26 09:55 PM


Seymour - it must have been after the moon of the night...

BC

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5 posted 2003-07-26 10:02 PM


You've been missed my friend...glad to read your words again..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-07-26 10:04 PM


SY!!  You frightened the daylights out of me!
Okay..I'm trying to relax and breathe normally now...
Fresh tea is brewing...I'll pour, don't get up.
~Late evening hugs & tea, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-07-26 11:10 PM


Dear friends just got back from an 1100 mile drive to pick up my grandson at camp. Just didn't have time to post. Thank you so much for missing me.  
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-07-27 03:54 AM


glad you're back...good write here as usual
VOE
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9 posted 2003-07-27 05:31 AM


Waking up always spoils the best dreams! Much enjoyed reading here this morning!! ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Margherita
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10 posted 2003-07-27 06:01 AM


Dear Seymour I love your short ones ... but I do hope that after cursing the devil you'll praise the Lord! haha ... after all the morning light finds you inspired, even though tired after the long trip ..... safe trip home.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-27 08:12 AM


passing,
Good morning, the sun is shining.

VOE
for your next dream.

Margherita
Praise the Lord and the sun is shining.

suthern
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12 posted 2003-07-27 05:10 PM


When those dreams are really worth reveling in, you can only curse when morning speaks and sends them scattering. *S*

I liked this very much, Seymour... welcome back! *S*

vlraynes
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13 posted 2003-07-27 05:34 PM



Great to see you back, Sy.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-07-27 06:39 PM


Good evening, stranger! I was about to send the angel brigade after you! Glad you are back and tickling my fancy again--with your poetry, that is!


EA

vandana
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15 posted 2003-07-27 07:23 PM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-07-27 07:28 PM


suthern
You have pinned the tail on the donkey. LOL


Earth Angel,
A boon dear love. Am I allowed to see the image of an Angel? By that I mean a picture,
please.

wranx
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17 posted 2003-07-28 12:15 PM


Curse the devil....yes!

(and yes, frightened for one another)

Thank you Sy


Ed

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18 posted 2003-07-28 12:25 PM


I could hear this ringing out as someone recited it! WOW!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-07-28 12:47 PM


wranx
Thank you my friend.

SharaRose
Thank you for the WOW.

garysgirl
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20 posted 2003-07-28 01:48 AM


Hey Seymour  
Well, you may have been late posting, but I just missed this jewel all day until now. Hey, I see you're up late, according to the reply above me.
Get to bed, and rest. I know you're probably still tired from that long trip you took.
Goodnight...see you tomorrow, my friend  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-28-2003 01:49 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-07-28 08:35 AM


Ethel
Well you know what they say.
When the cats away the mouse will play
LOL

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