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I Am (challenge) |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Not sure about this, but this is the first challenge I've tried.Here goes: I am the musicmaker of my soul There's times it yearns in raphsody's blues It screams like the playing of the steel guitar There's a feeling of rappers saying what to do It takes me to the country sound that seems so far The downbeat of my soul is gloom I am the musicmaker of my soul Sometime's it's sweet as an angelic sound The ballerina's abound in sight Playing the beat of that jazzy sound The opera resounding in the spotlight The soft melody of my soul is peace I am the musicmaker of my soul I choose the music of my soul It can range from high to low I'm the one that takes control I choose to stay or to go Letting the light or darkness flow I am the musicmaker of my soul angelblueyes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Crystal! Challenge well met... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Nancy:Thank you so much.This took some thought and it's a work in progress just like the writer.Thanks again. angelblueyes  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
angelblueyes - for a first challenge I would say this came out rather well... BC |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I agree...you met the challenge.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am the musicmaker of my soul. my my. That's just absolutely beautiful and absolutely true for all of us. Wish I'd written that. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Angel... You ARE the music! Such lovely lines in all the flavors of song. TD |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Yes, a music maker you are! A very beautiful you. *s |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this! I am the musicmaker of my soul...good gracious...I am tucking this line away in my soul, my friend. Believe me I needed these words. Patricia |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Crystal, this is absolutely beautiful. I love it.  You met the challenge well. Hugs  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
BC:Thanks, coming from you that means alot.  scorpio:Thanks very much.You've brought me a serenity:I appreciate your comment.We all have the music some just need a litle coaxing in showing it This Diamond:Thanks so much.I love the avriety of music the same as the variety of music is my soul  angelblueyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Chanson:Thank you very much  You're comment is very sweet.Patricia:I would do anything for my friends.Singing the flavors of my soul is nothing I wouldn't give.You are beautiful also my friend. Ethel:All I can say is wow>A response like that from you, means so much to me.You are as angelic as the clouds effortlessly float:squueze: angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
angel: well done and this line: I am the musicmaker of my soul is absolute perfection xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
littlewing:Thanks so much I'm a simple girl with simple pleasure's.You and everyone else have made my day with your responses.I'm glad I decided to join here.From the spirit of the bird to the wings of the angel so sweet together we fly until that glorious place we shall meet.angelbueyes |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
lovely...just lovely If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Excellent!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"The downbeat of my soul is gloom I am the musicmaker of my soul" VERY cool lines here, Crystal...I do love this. Well done! Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes indeed, you would be... This is lovely ~wranx "You shouldn't be surprised at what happens next" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just excellent! I applaud your work on this, I could not do it, or even come close |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I very much enjoyed your poem, wonderful thoughts ... you are the musician indeed. Love, Margherita [This message has been edited by Margherita (07-27-2003 06:19 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ceinwyn:Thanks so much. Kahlil:Thank you very much. Vicky:Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.  wranx:Thank you very much. pasing shadows:Thanks.Give it a try and let it come to you.When I sat down to do this, I didn't think I could either, but itcame and for you it will come also. Margherita:Thank you very much.It means alot to me.The music like poetry are the essence in life. angelblueyes |
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