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The Stars
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The Stars |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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The stars blined by their beauty i walk down a sandy beach all the while my eyes staring always staring always wishing wishing for the stars to shine for me wishing to be a part of them my feet make imprints in the sand but still i stare i stare at their purity i stare at the magic that fills peoples hearts with joy my heart is beating always pounding my mind is blank i feel no joy i feel no magic so i stare on waiting always waiting for my star to shine... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I Know how this is |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Some may say the enlightment of one's star is in how they reach for it. Pick one near to you, wish really hard, and ... ...like magic, you will know who you are. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
breathe in the starlight... your special glow will be within the exhale |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Beautifully written, I like your style. It was easily read, yet not too simple... Nice job. Nixa, Laq |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written ARCTIC WIND |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
We each have our own star that shines for us alone. But where is it? How will we know it if we do find it? The worst feeling is to be alone and without a purpose and that is only magnified with seeing other people finding their stars. |
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