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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-13 11:34 PM

You break me everytime
with every breathe
with every word
your eyes bore into mine
as if they were a window to my soul
as if you were looking at the real me
is that possible?
you break me everytime
with every glance
with every soft caress
my heart aches at the thought of you
you break me everytime.....

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-13 11:35 PM

This is beautiful and Welcome to Passions.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-06-14 12:12 PM

very good indeed! welcome!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-06-14 02:09 AM

This is a very good first post. I look
forward to reading more of your poems.
And, I would like to welcome you to the pages of blue......

Hugs,

Ethel....garysgirl

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-14 02:18 AM

Chelsea:

this is awesome -
nice entrance
you will love it there
truly
Welcome to PIP!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-14-2003 12:02 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-14 04:44 AM

I understand well

Welcome to Passions!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-06-16 11:34 PM

(big hugggssssssssss) Very complex feeling indeed, it can make you sand up straight and recoil in the same instance, love can be a huge central issue! (big hugggssssssss) This is a marvelous debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-06 06:03 PM

I love the name!

ARCTIC WIND

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2008-08-15 01:53 AM

Which is better, to be with your love and in agony or to be without your love at a lesser degree of agony? It seems that you have chose the first while I have taken the second. I am not sure I would be able to have my eyes bore into and still stand it.

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