The Gates To Hell . . . . . (Writing outside the box--challenge by littlewing)

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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-07-26 12:04 PM

Their tortured screams pierce dead of night,
No place of refuge be there in sight.
Satan's minions roam earthly plane,
In search of virgin souls to drain.

Gnashing beasts guard gates to hell,
Flames engulf all those who dwell.
Pain and suffering, brimstone fire,
Where respite be a flaming pyre.

So, heed these words and venture not,
In to the dark where sin's begot.
Brace your windows, lock your door,
Or you shall be, nevermore!

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-26-2003 12:15 PM).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2003-07-26 12:10 PM

oooh! there needs to be more to this..it's fantastic! Like the starting of a really creepy book....

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-07-26 02:12 PM

Linda - ahaha Ok now I am afraid of you
LOL

Excellent writing for one with a halo indeed . . . the other side is nasty, isnt it?
But you had fun, right?
This sounds like a chant . . .

Satan's minions roam earthly plane,
In search of virgin souls to drain.

a scary frightening chant
amazing indeed
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-26-2003 02:12 PM).]

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-26 02:17 PM

Hey I see you visited my relatives on my father's side

garysgirl

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4 posted 2003-07-26 02:28 PM

Oooohhhh!!! Our Angel visited hell!!
I'm glad you came back.

Hugs

Ethel

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-07-26 03:16 PM

Wow...very powerful!
Eric

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-07-26 05:19 PM

excellent,,,

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-07-26 05:22 PM

This was good, but you can only stay for a minute.We need more angels like you.
angelblueyes

Wind

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8 posted 2003-07-26 05:23 PM

well..certanly different from your normal style. Well done..nice twist of darkness

Nightshade

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just out of reach

9 posted 2003-07-26 05:56 PM

Yikes!! Good write Linda!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-07-26 06:31 PM

SEA ~

Now, there's an idea!--Earth Angel writing a creepy book! Sounds good to me!

EA

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11 posted 2003-07-26 06:33 PM

littlewing ~

--Afraid of little ole me?!?--You're a smart woman! LOL

And btw, you're right about the other side being nasty! It's a hot place to visit, but I wouldn't want to live there!

Linda

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12 posted 2003-07-26 06:35 PM

Aenimal ~

Yes, I did meet those relatives of yours! They send their hate! Oh, my! Do forgive me! Hell has a way of doing strange things to angels!

EA

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13 posted 2003-07-26 06:37 PM

Ethel ~

Whew!--and it's great to be back! Now I truly know the meaning of the saying, "Hotter than Hades"!!!

Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-07-26 06:38 PM

Eric ~

Perhaps it is "powerful" because it took all of my strength! LOL

EA

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-07-26 06:38 PM

Than-Q!!!

EA

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16 posted 2003-07-26 06:39 PM

angelblueyes ~

Believe you me! One minute was enuff!---See! I can't even spell now!

EA

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-07-26 06:40 PM

Wind ~

Yeppers! A twist of darkness!---Boo!

EA

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18 posted 2003-07-26 06:42 PM

Chris ~

"Yikes!!!"--You can say that again! I flew out of there like a bat outta hell!

Linda

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