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Open Poetry #27

May It Be

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2003-07-24 02:15 AM

MAY IT BE

May it be
when you think
of me you smile
and know I loved you

May it be
when you think
of me you smile
and know I'm okay

May it be
when you think
of me you smile
and know I survived

May it be
when you think
of me you smile
and know I let you go

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (07-24-2003 02:21 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-07-24 02:23 AM

May it be
when you think
of me you smile
and know I let you go

Rhonda,this is a sad yet very strong
and positive write. I really like it.

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-07-24 02:24 AM

May it be...that you continue to write and post
beautiful poems like this one.
You already know I love this one.
So good to see you writing again.

Hugs,
~Mum
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2003-07-26 03:21 PM

May it be.

~Titus

The few. The proud. The Marines.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-26 03:26 PM

Ahh sweetie...don't we all hope for this with our past loves.
That they remember us and smile...is all we can ask.
So tender...so sad..beautiful write.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Stapleton13
Junior Member

since 2002-08-06

Posts 13
Windsor, Ontario Canada

5 posted 2003-07-26 03:51 PM

very strong and really good poem

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2003-07-26 05:47 PM

This is such a wonderful poem Rhonda, thank you for sharing it with us

Andy

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-07-26 06:26 PM

This is sad, but beautiful.I hope the this all comes for you.
angelblueyes

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