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Mahogany Hate (littlewing's challenge)
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Mahogany Hate (littlewing's challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It rolls through my heart thundering whispers of rage.... I can’t pretend the anger doesn’t exist it swirls through my soul mahogany hatred smearing me, to the depths of my soul disturbing distorting controlling.... my every thought.... remembering every lie you ever told the cruel touch, of your loveless hands despising every breath you ever took and so I chant... vengeance is mine... wallowing ever deeper in this moment relishing, this putrid emotion..... ~SEA~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YES. you got into it and let it go... that, m'lovely sue, is the idea! damn... shaking my head. (y'kinda SHOCKED me yanno...chuckle) and that is a GOOD thing!  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL shocked you? now that is cool, sometimes, you just gotta let it roll   |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - this is awesome. Yet...when I look at your photo....I just can't see you feeling or projecting anything other than warmth. Maybe we should all send in our worst photos and then....ummm...no nevermind. hugs, Chris  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
rofl...thanks for that Chris....you are too kind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Susan...you just let it all roll off your tongue...good for you! Well done..and challenge well met. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
...and coming out the stronger for it. Good job SEA. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Nancy... PK....they say if it doesn't kill you thanks |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write outside your box as well as you do inside of it!  EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue Good God, this is awesome! relishing, this putrid emotion..... these are great lines where have you been hiding this stuff? shocked me too Ok Linda shocked me first excellent debut indeed xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply powerful words. Eric |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sounds like me in the morning before I have my coffee grins |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yikes! I think you did it! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yep...scary. Definately out of your area, but ya've pulled it off with style |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, Damn girl you go! some powerful raw emotion here...awesome work as usual. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! remind me not to make ya mad |
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