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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-07-26 08:22 AM



~*~
The fire in your eyes
Dances to soulful music
Of your spirit song,
Igniting endless passions
So that we might dance in flames.
~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-07-26 08:24 AM


So pretty..few words that say so much!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-07-26 08:33 AM


EarthAngel~
The Tanka format is the perfect poetic setting for your thoughts~
This is LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-07-27 11:12 PM


You are true to your light,
and the warmth of your love.

Hot stuff lady Linda!!!

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-27 11:20 PM


BluesSerenade ~

Coming from you, that is quite a compliment!
You certainly have been known to heat up these blue seas with your passionate pen!


Linda

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5 posted 2003-07-27 11:29 PM


Oooh I like, I like!
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-07-27 11:31 PM


Skyfire ~

I'm glad! I'm glad! lol

Huggums,
EA

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-07-28 01:00 AM


Linda - h'mmmmmmmm....

BC

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8 posted 2003-07-28 06:19 AM


reading this makes my heart dance,,,
Patricia
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9 posted 2003-07-28 07:13 AM


Very beautiful, EA.  I will have to try a tanka...while I am in one of those "give it a try" moods!  

You did this tanka so well!

Patricia

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10 posted 2003-07-28 07:56 AM


Wow...!!!
Eric

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11 posted 2003-07-28 09:52 AM


Linda, this is beautiful. You can
say so much in so few words.
Hugs  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-07-28 10:02 AM


SharaRose ~

Writing in these abbreviated forms is good exercise for my brain!

Have a great day!

Huggums,
EA

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13 posted 2003-07-28 10:04 AM


Marge ~

Ooops! Sorry I missed you! Thank you for your warm reply, Dear One!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-07-28 10:05 AM


BC ~

h'mmmmmmmmm to your "h'mmmmmmmmm"!


EA

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-07-28 10:06 AM


Q ~

Making your heart dance makes mine do same!


EA

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16 posted 2003-07-28 10:07 AM


Patricia ~

That's the pioneering spirit! I'll keep an eye out for your tanka!

Write on!

Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-07-28 10:08 AM


Eric ~

Wow!!! to your "Wow!!!"!!!  


EA

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18 posted 2003-07-28 10:09 AM


Ethel ~

I wish my former English teachers could read your reply!  I was often told that I was too flowery and the essence of my writing was lost in all those words! lol


Linda

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19 posted 2003-07-28 11:36 AM


warming my heart, reading your words with these eyes.
thankyou! xxxxxxxxxxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-07-28 11:48 AM


Earth Angel
Now with this you must be talking to Randy.
LOL

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-07-28 11:58 AM


gem ~

To warm your heart is to warm my own!


EA

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-07-28 12:00 PM


Mr. T-Man ~

I may be too hot for even Randy to handle! lol

--but you, are a whole different story!

Huggums to two hotties
EA

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23 posted 2003-07-28 11:32 PM


I like the images played out in this one.

Enjoyed

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2003-07-29 12:13 PM


Janette ~

You would be one who would appreciate "the images played out in this one", O' Hot 'n Steamy One! lol


Linda

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25 posted 2003-07-29 04:09 AM


nicely done! I enjoyed
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26 posted 2003-07-30 06:12 PM


nice read
Earth Angel
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27 posted 2003-07-31 12:47 PM


passing shadows ~

Thank you, dear one whose shadows are passing!

Huggums,
EA

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2003-07-31 12:48 PM


vandana ~

I appreciate you always stopping by!


Linda

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