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I Am (for da challenge too, hehehe)
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I Am (for da challenge too, hehehe) |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root. I wonder how deep my heart can feel, or if it can at all. I hear death always aking to pay a visit I see the eyes of the Moon piercing me. I want to feel, to know true emotion. I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root. I pretend to be wise to cover my foolishness. I feel the stroke of the Sky's wispy hands. I touch the rage of blazes with freezing glee. I worry that loneliness will be my only friend. I cry like a river when I can no longer hold it all in. I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root. I understand that happiness must be deserved. I say people are the epitome of destruction, but with their hands rests our preservation. I dream of a reality of fantasies. I try to be what the world wants me to be. I hope I can be what I truly am and no more. I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You are what you hope to be and more thank you for sharing xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...indeed, there has to a root, where fire and ice connect...because I've often felt heat to be cold; and cold to fan flames... Well done! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I touch the rage of blazes " That you did. Yep, that you did... thank you  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Greetings IcyFlamez89, fellow poet: You ARE the passion of mingling...sorely needed here. Great write. TD |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nice to meet you IcyFlame....enjoyed learning who you are. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I dream of a reality of fantasies very nicely done *s M |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Be what YOU want to be, Icy... It's the only path to happiness... Nicely written, my friend... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nicely done And glad to meet you Ed |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Icy, I enjoyed reading who you are. It's nice to meet you, Poet, Sir.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I wonder how deep my heart can feel, or if it can at all. I want to feel, to know true emotion." You feel and know...it's in these words.. "I pretend to be wise to cover my foolishness." I do the same...lol "I try to be what the world wants me to be." It's so much easier being ourselves.. Very much enjoyed this! Susan C. |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Wow, thank you everyone. I really needed some encouragement and you guys helped to lift my spirits. luv u all ~Icy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you are "Fire and Ice", then you have a built in balancing system! For the fire warms the ice and the ice cools the fire!  EA |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
lollz, or an internal time bomb waiting to explode. Sometimes one overpowers the other, and no one around me likes it when that happens. I can turn agressive and malicious, or cold and apathetic. But when the two do balance out... it's a nice little moment of peace. |
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