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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-07-20 01:33 AM

Daisy Mae...
What is that in your voice I hear?
I just can't tell, it's not quite clear.
There you are weaving in, and out of my feet.
Playing to a kitty cat beat, so sweet.

Sleep all day, play all night.
Fuzzy little one, heart so light.
Sleep from dawn till dusk.
Now up and hungry, making a fuss.

Meowing at the door, well can’t you see me!?
Come on now feed me, feed me, lady!
Step to it, and I may just ask for more.
See I know it’s me you adore.

My tummy is full now, I think I’ll take nap
But first I’m off for my bath.
Ah, much better can I borrow your lap
I off to dreamy land down my sleepy path

I gave you a thrill circling ‘round your feet.
And played to my kitty cat beat, so sweet.
I let you feed me, and thrilled you, yes it’s true.
Now i'm in your comfy lap...
If you could be me what would you do?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2003-07-20 09:06 AM

Oh, so very sweet. Kittys are so cute, but then they grow up to be cats, and become arrogant. Enjoyed reading about your kitty!

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-07-20 09:11 AM

Purrfect poem...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-07-20 09:42 AM

) Thanks to you both. I am glad you liked.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-07-20 02:36 PM

SharaRose~
WELCOME - WELCOME - WELCOME to Passions~

Love your 'critique' messge~
Yep ... the pen writes what the heart cannot conceal~

You might want to take a peek in the Poetry Workshop Forums ... we have a great teacher and LOTS OF FUN trying our hand at different forms. Just write the teacher .. or leave a post and she'll open the door so you can get in !

Psst ... the playground is out behind the classroom ... you can usually find me in the sandbox or on the merry-go-round~
COME ON OVER~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-07-20 02:51 PM

Thanks Marge...when I get there I'll give a bird call...hehehehe you'll know it's me. Secret code...You know like when we were all kids...that little whistle, or a bird call or something to let your friend know you are nearby....hahahahaha Silly me. I got a giggle out of this comment. I'll check out the workshop. God knows I need one.

SharaRose @-->--

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-07-25 12:56 PM

How precious, your little
Daisy Mae...

I miss my kitties!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-07-25 01:03 PM

Thanks Sunshine. Bless ya. She is a delight!

SharaRose @-->--

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-07-25 01:12 PM

SharaRose:I enjoyed this.The playfulness and ease with which you write brought a smile to my face.I haven't had a kitten in ages and you've reminded me of the joy they bring.Thanks.
angelblueyes

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-07-25 01:23 PM

Thanks Angelblueeyes. She's a trip sometimes, but then aren't all cats a little trippy in a way!? They are so independant, and do things you aren't going to expect..which really is the beauty of it! hehehe

Hugs,
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IntoTheFlames
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

10 posted 2003-07-25 05:05 PM

This poem reminds me in so many ways of my own kitty cat! You have captured their nature exactly! They can be so finiky but turn around and be so loving, complicated but wonderful creatures!

~*Summer*~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-07-25 05:12 PM

SharaRose ~

Your Daisy Mae sounds just as adorable as Passion's Ethel Mae (garysgirl)! lol

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem. I smiled all the way through it!

Warm welcoming hugs to you--and to Daisy Mae!
Earth Angel

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

12 posted 2003-07-25 10:57 PM

Hi Intotheflames, and EarthAngel..thanks for the comments. She is a delight. Just precious!

I wish I knew how to find the icons all of you use. Like the smiley with the balloons,and things like that. *sigh* oh well I don't know how to find them soooo I will stick with the big grin, or smiley.

Hugs to all,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-07-27 01:27 PM

Hi Shara,

I found it!! And, I was not disappointed at all. LOL
This is a delight, Lady. I hope that you realize
you are fitting right in here with the rest of us.
I love cats and dogs, too. I've written a few
about my little Scooter dog. He's my other "Baby".
Hugs

Ethel Mae

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-07-27 03:50 PM

Shara

If you could be me what would you do?

exactly what they do already
sleep eat and eat birds?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
lol
ok I would sleep and eat
this is lovely
xxoo

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

15 posted 2003-07-27 06:59 PM

Thanks garysgirl, that is so sweet to welcome me. I love all the talent that's here. I have been here for a little bit. A few days, and I have been sooooooo delighted with all I read. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

I just wish one thing. I wish I knew how to do the little smileys with the hearts, and the one that waves...just any of them! I wish someone would helpppppp! pleaseeee.

Thanks Littlewing--Yeppers, we had to keep Daisy outside when Pip Squeaks cage was open. They took turns. When daisy was in she always watched Pip squeak, and I knew what she was thinkin.' Sylvester and Tweety came to mind. Alot of the time though Pip squeak had the rule of the roost..hehehe

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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2003-07-27 07:35 PM

enjoyed

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

17 posted 2003-07-28 05:27 PM

Thanks Vandana...I am glad you liked! Bless ya for the read!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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