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Secrets (Reminiscing)
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Secrets (Reminiscing) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Secrets (Reminiscing) She's leaving me now after taking me there. No more hot summer nights, no more kisses to share. I could break down and beg her to stay but I know her secret, she only wanted to play. This didn't happen last night nor did it happen today. I'm reminiscing over secrets from bygone days. JamesLee July25 2003 |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
very sad but wonderful poem...great write! *~HUGS~* ~*Summer*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This made me think that it must have been good while it lasted and something is better than ... nothing ... I hope. Enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Intotheflames and Janette for the nice responses.... Janette it is always nice while it lasted...I'm thankful I could share a piece of her life...james |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She's leaving me now after taking me there. Nice lines James~ It's true, we can't go back, but there's always something there to remind us, and that's not so bad after all. Enjoyed your poem, very much. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou for sharing this with us James. You have such a romantic soul. Chris  "At one glance |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Blues Serenade and Nightshade for the nice responses...I appreciate it...James |
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