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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Here they come There they go LongJohn and The evil Toe. Why they bother I don't know... Here they come There they go. There they go Here they come Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum. Balladeer Will make them numb There they go Here they come. They strike like kamikazes Or desperate paparazzis To try to get their little bit of fame But everytime they try it There's no way to deny it 'Deer beats the retards at their silly game. LongJohn's here So was Toe Watch how fast I make them go. Never stay Too long, you know Here they come There they go....  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL...smiling at seeing you here, 'Deer.  Thanks for the chuckle today.  "My friends are my estate." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh gosh...now 'Deer's in action...this MUST mean the boys are back in town! Where's Toe? Where's Reb? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am trying to suppress that urge for a NEENER NEENER NEENER My money is on YOU everytime Michael. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its about time you got your poetic behind in here and played with us... where you been boyeeee??? Golfing? Spamming? Spraying for pirates and toes pest control? Let the games begin. good to see you Michael.  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you know I take Toe's side.. out of pity. This was so good. This is probably my favorite of all of the attacks. Keep them comin |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
They're BAAAAA-AAAAACK!!!  And I'm sure glad. It's always good to see ya'll.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
They FEAR you...that's why they don't hang around!!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
MASTER!  [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (07-26-2003 12:00 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Too much golfing? Too many big roaches?... Get back here and step on some TOE's - They're getting out of foot around here...  |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Love to start the day with a smile and laughter on my lips. Better watch out your buddies are a lurkin' around the next corner. Oh!!!!! I think I see ToeRag a hiddin' in that that bush or could it be LJ? LOL See Ya Bon-Non  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have the nerve to comment on their absences when YOU've been pulling the disappearing act? LOL This is pure bait and you know it... hope they take it. *G* 'bout time you left those poor lil unsuspecting golf balls in peace for a moment, Deer one... I've missed ya. *S* I'm sure your buddies have, too. *G* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Come out come out wherever they are!! Balladeer, good to see you on these blue pages again. More please! Chris "At one glance |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Hahahaha ... good one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I admire the spirit in which this was written---NOT! lol  --but I sure as hades enjoyed the humor and the poetry!!!! Very well done! Bravo bello! Love & Laughter, Linda --and sending consolation hugs to Toe & LJ! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your smile is the perfect "tune" to accompany your words ... I confess I don't know who represents your target, but I appreciate your humour... and the rhythm of the poem. Love, Margherita smiling... |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Uh-oh.....now we all know what's going to happen next!!!!! Well, I can't wait, and I can almost hear the keyboards clicking away! Great one, oh Balladeer!! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hehe - sounds like another poetic battle is about to start! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
yanno -- it pains me to admit how damn good this is micheal  too good to be way down on page 9  aside from how hard comedy is and the perfect timing you have here... the meter and the rhyme are tight  like you said on one of mine once -- it may look easy -- but it aint easy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, I'm sure you must have got rained out, But whatever enjoyed the read. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You dumb twit.....you're just asking for some pest control aren't ya?.....LOL |
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