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Goodbye
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Goodbye |
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LukeatNFFC Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42Nottingham, England |
Goodbye- The shadow of the sadness, The pain driving to madness, Forever gone... ...The presence of a loved one. Blinking tears back at night, Daybreak seems to bring no light, Everything has gone.... ...The presence of a loved one. No comfort here, Just pain and fear. What have you done wrong? Why has your loved one gone? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yeah, I ask too |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Such powerful and strong questions.Wish I had the answers for you. angelblueyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I very much like how you expressed your feelings in this write. If I had tried it, it would have been 2 miles long and no one would have read it! Take care... |
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LukeatNFFC Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42Nottingham, England |
The original was slightly longer, and slightly more boring so I deleted every word of it, and now its been revamped as this version. |
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