Open Poetry #27 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665![]() |
White foam lines, roll ashore below blue skies of crystal, punctuated by white plumes of clouds. Sun shines down on people at rest, no cares. Carefree, they stroll, run, play or shout out loud. Gulls survey things from on high, searching for a morsel of food, discarded from sated humans. Long snaking lines of people walk, talking in the soft sea air, to most people this much is rare. Skylark sings beautifuly above my head, stark reality in this place of leisure. Towering cliffs, decorated by seabirds, as ancient as the sea, to me just gazing around is such a pleasure. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sitting and watching is such a joy, isn't it...your poem took me there for a moment...could even smell the funnel cakes and cotton candy, hearing all the sounds of the amusements, which brings the senses much pleasure. Wonderful write. |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
It is always a pleasure to take just one moment and take in the beauty of the sea and the beach around it! Great write! ~*Summer*~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am holding my pebbles from the seashore as I read your poetry...I want to be there and experiance this with you, you make it all sound so beautiful! xxxx love,~ARH |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful description , yes went there a couple of times years ago , my family still have an occasional hioliday there Hope |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful images were seen through your words, it made me want to be there. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Utterly stupendous descriptive writing, Dear Rose of Gold! I want to visit that place again and again--so this is definitley a ![]() ![]() ![]() EA |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Wow, what a nice poem! I love the way you described everything, it was really relaxing! ![]() Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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