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The Reckoning
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The Reckoning |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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The Reckoning On this...today...the skies awake with tears of heaven beating down upon a broken, thirsty ground where past illusions come to rest perverted by the merciless a lightning strike a stricken heart a final blow for all who show the scars of accusation's claws that bare the flaws of no confess in halo of self-righteousness injustice condemnation swift without the gift of shadowed doubt and falsities are spouted loudly from the mouths of those who would believe they know yet truly do not know at all and so they fall these tears of mourn on this the morn of judgment day the truth be learned the victory earned by those who true of heart have stayed and suffered sting of perfidy at calloused hands of those once known as 'friend' ~vlraynes "My friends are my estate." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This, although angry in tone, is the voice of pain. You rival thor for the light of sky in the storm vicky. Here's a towel. I do believe you just danced naked between the bolts. thank you   |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A purge, it seems Very nice...yes Ed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Powerful writing, dear Vicky! I reckon those who betray their friends are building up huge karmic debts! Hugs, your friend forever!  Linda |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hmmmm more perfidy more "friend" write the pain away Vicki |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*prays this isn't directed at her* Powerful, and remind me to keep on your good side  *wanders away pondering* |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write n read,,,  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...thank you, friend, for being YOU...and?...thanks for the towel.*grin* Love you, lady.  Ed...a purge, indeed..thank you, sir.*smile* Linda...yes..I reckon so too. Thank you, friend. Brian...thank you...YOU truly are 'friend'. Rhonda...what do YOU think? Is there some reason why I SHOULD direct this at you? Of course it isn't! LOL Love you... QjQ...thank you much, sir.*smile* "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-25-2003 02:06 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
a final blow for all who show the scars of accusation's claws that bare the flaws of no confess in halo of self-righteousness Vicky, thanks for sharing this with us. You are so sweet.  hugs Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is very powerful.It's always intriguing to read you.An awesome job. angelblueyes |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite a cathartic piece, m'friend... You really know how to cut loose... Um... I'll just move a bit over to the right here...  ... Well penned, Vickster... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very much i'm liking this!! i love the anger purged! i love the fear felt...i love the way its written..all of it...great write! hugs, g I want to run naked in the Blue! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow...It's as if you are writing about my experience in the past. I only know this. It has made me far more watchful of what people *claim* to be toward me. It's not that I want to be, but once burned seems you always are on guard to a certain extent. Thanks for sharing this. It helps to know someone out there [understands] what it's like. Thanks again for sharing. I know how much this hurts. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - ouch, a purge for sure, and written well... BC |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Oo-ie. Or I could just echo everybody else, but that's boring. You know what I mean. Oo-ie. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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