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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-07-24 11:29 PM


With rising storms
it rides the wind
of skies long blue
and thoughts to mend

The heaving sea's
with swollen swells
flooding the time
emptying wells

Release the rain
and take cover
tear away walls
not to suffer

Must face the pain
and let it go
change the tugging
release the flow

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-07-24 11:32 PM


Oh wow!! Have been telling myself this lately.The release is what we need. This is a keeper.You did great.
angelblueyes

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
2 posted 2003-07-27 07:50 PM


this read like a soft exhale.

beautiful as ever.

and its what i need to do, i may take your advice m friend.

xxxxxxxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2003-07-27 10:08 PM


Angel - everyone needs a release,
           its how we maintain.

         Thank you and hope all works out for you.


GEM - ... ALWAYS in my thoughts my friend.

         Your cloud isn't so different.  xx

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-27-2003 10:08 PM).]

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