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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-06-14 09:09 PM




Imprinted Upon My Heart


Sometimes I read your words
and I am left held in awe,
not only of how you manage
to master your craft,
but also of how
each word wraps itself around me
captivating me.

*~Leaving me wanting for more.....~*

More of the beauty encapsulated
in each word as I visualize it
in my minds eye view.
More of the sudden warmth felt
when reading words from your heart.

A smile from me escapes
when I read the joy
there in your eyes.

*~You whisper and I hear.~*

You have spoken softly
and left your words forever
imprinted upon my heart.



I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-14-2003 09:11 PM).]

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Saunni
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1 posted 2003-06-14 09:14 PM


This is extremely beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Saunni
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2 posted 2003-06-14 09:15 PM


Cool title by the way!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-15 05:07 AM


a beautiful write Donna....thanks for reposting
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-06-15 09:56 AM


Very very beautiful, enjoyed this greatly.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-06-15 10:12 AM


Donna, beautiful write. I do hope you are feeling better. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-06-15 12:09 PM


Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing this, Donna.
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7 posted 2003-06-15 01:06 PM


Beautiful sweet lady...
Be well...be happy.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2003-06-17 09:49 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all have missed you soooooooo much and I hope all is well with you as we keep sending angel hugs your way to heal you! (big hugggsssssssss) We are all here with you everyday, you are everyones friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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9 posted 2003-06-18 12:12 PM


You have spoken softly
and left your words forever
imprinted upon my heart.

Yes. *S*

I suspect this is very personal for you... but as great poetry does, it reaches others. *S* I couldn't help but think of some of my favorite poets as I read it... hope you don't mind the borrowing. *S*

This is lovely!

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-06-18 12:25 PM


"You whisper, and I hear"...such caring, gentle words--from a caring, gentle spirit.


Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-07-27 11:38 AM


In gentle smiles, hope your day is filled with Sunshine and passionate poetry.
Enchantress
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12 posted 2003-07-27 12:17 PM


Thinking about you today Donna...
Hope you're feeling better...
~Healing hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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13 posted 2003-07-27 12:32 PM


I knew they
would start lifting
you with
gentle touch...


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14 posted 2003-07-27 12:52 PM


Donna, dear sweet lady, I thought this was
absolutely beautiful when I first read it.....
and I still think it's beautiful. I'm so glad
that you reposted it, my friend.

I hope and pray that you will be well real soon.
You remain in my prayers and thoughts.
Heart Hugs to you,     
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-07-27 01:01 PM


hey Donna, great to see you, thanks for the write here

hope things are looking up

Martie
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16 posted 2003-07-27 01:10 PM


You brought me a smile with this lovely poem, Donna.  I sure hope you are feeling better, my friend...my thoughts are with you.
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17 posted 2003-07-27 01:18 PM


Doesn't it feel great! I love being in love, even when there are bad days, because the good most certainly outwiegh the bad

May I print this and give it to my wife?

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-07-27 05:00 PM


Enjoyed...James
Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-07-27 08:41 PM


Donna, my heart goes out to you for all that you have been going through. I know you have not been well and the meds can really interfere with your creativity and therefore you haven't been posting new poems, BUT it certainly would be wonderful if you could pull out some more of your golden oldies for us to enjoy!


healing hugs,
Linda


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20 posted 2003-07-27 10:14 PM


Hi Sweetie!! Keep smilin'...healing hugs to you, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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